Website and Video with feedback
Website link:
hislordshipchudder.wixsite.com/metropolis
Video First Draft:
Video Feedback:
Above is my first draft of my music video.
There are some improvements i need to make for my video. The song title 'shut up and dance' needs to appear sooner in the video and it should be in the same front as my production logo and the artists name. I also need to have some more camera movement in the video because at the moment it is looking very static, I could possibly use the Ken Burns effect to create this movement. Additionally i need to fix some lip syncing issues and make sure they are more intimate, alongside generally cleaning up and sharpening of the video.
Website Feedback:
Above was the link to my first draft, now it is the final product. There were many changes that had to be made to the site, there wasn't much intertextuality between the video and the site initially but that has now be rectified. Some images used weren't framed properly, they have now been cropped and re applied to the site to improve their visual appeal. I originally didn't call to my audience, asking them to interact with my artist, I have now made several, eye catching, text boxes encouraging interaction between my artist and his audience. Some original ideas like my black and read artist photos of my artist have been scrapped because after attempting it, it didn't have the desired effect I was looking for.
hislordshipchudder.wixsite.com/metropolis
Video First Draft:
Video Feedback:
Above is my first draft of my music video.
There are some improvements i need to make for my video. The song title 'shut up and dance' needs to appear sooner in the video and it should be in the same front as my production logo and the artists name. I also need to have some more camera movement in the video because at the moment it is looking very static, I could possibly use the Ken Burns effect to create this movement. Additionally i need to fix some lip syncing issues and make sure they are more intimate, alongside generally cleaning up and sharpening of the video.
Website Feedback:
Above was the link to my first draft, now it is the final product. There were many changes that had to be made to the site, there wasn't much intertextuality between the video and the site initially but that has now be rectified. Some images used weren't framed properly, they have now been cropped and re applied to the site to improve their visual appeal. I originally didn't call to my audience, asking them to interact with my artist, I have now made several, eye catching, text boxes encouraging interaction between my artist and his audience. Some original ideas like my black and read artist photos of my artist have been scrapped because after attempting it, it didn't have the desired effect I was looking for.
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